#60 - 01-B Bonus Page #3 – Cybertech - in Chapter I

01-B Bonus Page #3 – Cybertech

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Tricksteratops

Tricksteratops Tricksteratops

Wow, I really did not expect that there will be an explanation for existence of lizard titties xD kudos!

I'm gonna read much more before actually giving some proper critique, but for now I can honestly say I enjoy reading it and the artwork too :)

11th Jun 2021, 12:24 PM

TrueGhul

TrueGhul TrueGhul

That's a study of biology, it leaves scars on the psyche. Like, urge to explain why humanoid sentient retiles has mammal features.

11th Jun 2021, 10:14 PM

Tricksteratops

Tricksteratops Tricksteratops

Well, hence kudos! :D I am one of those people that will read your comic with and keep thinking 'why the hell this lizard has boobs?' (beside the obvious reasons of your artistic preference ;) ) and you took that to account. I certainly did not expect that being explained so it did impress me in some way :)

12th Jun 2021, 11:44 AM

Zenom

Zenom Zenom

I'm enjoying so far seems like an interesting story ahead. I do find the great number of spelling and grammar mistakes distracting. Is there anyone you could use as an editor?

1st Aug 2021, 4:35 PM

TrueGhul

TrueGhul TrueGhul

hi, It's always nice to hear that someone enjoy comic. Speaking of grammar and spelling. This page was originally published in 2018. Since then I'm had improved both as an English user and as a writer, also I have an editor now. so, everything is proofread now.

The second chapter should be significantly better and the overall language should improve over time.

2nd Aug 2021, 9:08 PM

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