#331 - 05-30 Cryptowalled - in Chapter V

05-30 Cryptowalled

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TrueGhul

TrueGhul TrueGhul said:

Hi guys,
I want to know if you like the new word bubbles styles. Please let me know in the comments.

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3rd Aug 2022, 2:28 PM

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robnot

robnot robnot

actually didn't notice,, till you said.. :)

6th Aug 2022, 2:29 PM

Jesper

Jesper Jesper

Visually they work really well in this setting with dark background, and it can be helpful sometimes when it might be difficult otherwise to see who says what. I obviously don't know how you're going to implement them in other settings, but they need care when used against brighter backgrounds. (I've seen others using colored word bubbles in ways that makes it look a bit gaudy, sometimes almost to the point of being distracting. But *other* "others" make it work, so while it's tricky it's not impossible.) If you make it work well they do look fine, and could do really nice with your style of using colors. The fact that ROBNOT (and I by the way) didn't even notice them until you mentioned it says that you've managed to incorporate them well into your style.

This is my first time commenting here, so let me take the opportunity to say that I love your story and the way you're telling it! It doesn't shy away from horrors or uncomfortable topics, but doesn't revel in them either. It handles the big issues and the small ones with equal sincerity and respect. It feels genuine, believable and honest. Thank you for letting us read this!

7th Aug 2022, 12:01 PM

TrueGhul

TrueGhul TrueGhul

So, First of all, Welcome! It's always good to see a new face here. Thanks for the tip about bright backgrounds I didn't think of it yet but it sounds tricky. Also big thanks for the feedback, I really glad to hear that I manage to maintain balance in The Afterwar storytelling. TBH I was a bit worried if the story didn't turn into "too smut" lately.

7th Aug 2022, 9:03 PM

Martin

Martin Martin

Aaand I see a flashback to level 5 encryption which *Tiny* technically should not know about, just after general surrender order.

7th Aug 2022, 8:41 PM

TrueGhul

TrueGhul TrueGhul

congrats, you got one point :P

7th Aug 2022, 9:05 PM

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