#198 - 03-62 Introductions - in Chapter III
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Today finally I finished Chapter I rework. There is a lot of writing improving here I also would like to thanks Casanova who offered to proofread my broken English around the end of chapter I. His hard work is a reason why chapter 2-3 are readable and help with the chapter I rework now. So once again big thanks, men. Chapter I also has some of the pages redraw with much better quality and closer to current comic style. I also add two new pages witch clarify some of the unfinished threads.
I recommend you to read the chapter I once again, but if you don't have time here are those two additional pages:
Lizard rage #3
Why they hate me.